Go read my super short story

by kalbzayn on November 24, 2006

The story is so short that I doubt if I can describe it in fewer words than it took to write it and it is about Christmas.

The story is posted at 55 Fiction and the title is Christmas Surprise.

Now, did you enter a story?  I better read something of yours over there in the next few days or I’ll…we’ll nothing really.

But, go send them a story anyway.

Crap, this is way longer than my Christmas story.

{ 5 comments… read them below or add one }

MOM 11.25.06 at 6:41 am

I enjoyed reading your short story and all the others. Thanks for the trip, Mike. How did your MOM like the hair? Love MOM

kalbzayn 11.26.06 at 9:51 pm

Yeah, I need to talk about the hair sometime over here. I wanted it to be a surprise for as many people as possible when I saw them over the weekend.

I’ll get a picture and mention it someday this week.

Paul 11.27.06 at 7:33 am

Nice work. I liked your story. The twist ending was good :)

Kelly Parra 12.03.06 at 7:49 pm

A great short, Mike! lol! Funny!

kalbzayn 12.04.06 at 1:22 am

Thanks Kelly and Paul.

When I read it before submitting it, I was wondering if anybody would actually get the ending. I worry about really odd stuff when I stay up too late.

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